lucb911's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the Last of the Dashkin]

Great work!

I enjoy your animation styles and cute creatures, they make me smile. But I think you should ditch the narraration for the second part. I understand that no one would understand the story without the narraration, so if there is to be a big plot twist, narraration would be okay. But use as little narraration as possible.

chluaid responds:

not all episodes will be narrated. As I've said on a couple other responses, this particular short is setting up a bigger picture for Brackenwood. As far as I'm concerned, it's the last narration you'll hear in Brackenwood for the foreseeable future :D

[Max and Emma 2]

Awesome!

This was frickin' awesome! The only thing that could have made it better was if you carried on and on again like in the last one. I admire your words of wisdom, :3!

Sorrygirl99 responds:

ok... random ...
very
thanks!